Half an hour?!! Wow, incredible, and worth every word. The last two paragraphs are in themselves stunning. The starkness of the beginning and the short sentences, the depth behind the simple words. You're good at fine-tuning the emotions between these two and putting down Louis' perfect strength. Bravo, bravo!
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Date: 2004-01-02 08:16 am (UTC)