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Well, [profile] stories_100 is actually rather fun. Some of you are already on there, but dude... give it a try. I loves me some drabbles.

Anyway, here are my first three, for anyone interested:

Beginnings

I loosened my hold on him, my victim, feeling the smooth lapels of his coat slide through my fingers. I barely heard his question as he fell to the ground: “But who are you!”

I didn’t answer. He slept; weak from drink and blood loss. And it was such a perfect night; my first strike in claiming him as mine. I decided to remember that question, and how it was full of wonder even though his speech was slurred and his heart stuttered.

It pains me that even now, years later, I want to ask him that very same question.

 

Teammates

Crosswords. They’re pointless. Unnecessary. I shouldn’t have started this one, but I can’t let it win. “Damned thing!”

Louis glances up from his book, continuing to absentmindedly rub my foot in his lap. “Need help?”

“Eight letters,” I say, “Erinaceus Europaeus.”

“Hedgehog.”

I shake my head at him. “How did you know that?”

“Books.”

“You should get out more.”

“You gallivant enough for both of us.”

I snort. “I’m returning you to the store. This wasn’t what I had in mind for a companion.”

He smirks. “I wouldn’t be so sure.”

“Hush, you. And give the other foot some attention.”



Air

“Are you cold, Louis?” he asks.

“No, I’m fine.”

He raises his hand to my cheek. “Liar.”

“Lestat!” I gasp, “Losing your grip on me in mid-air worries me more!”

He snorts. “Are you afraid?”

“No.”

But do I trust him? I don’t know. I know he’s changeable. I know he’s cruel. It’s madness, to put myself at his mercy. Why do I do it? I shouldn’t trust him, when up here, in the cold, lonely night, he alone protects me from plummeting to the ground, to almost certain death.

A cold thrill runs through me. I clutch him closer.

Date: 2006-06-23 06:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladydaydream.livejournal.com
Very nice. I like what you've done so far. :)

Date: 2006-06-23 07:05 pm (UTC)

Date: 2006-06-23 06:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avariecaita.livejournal.com
Baby, you've got them! *is pwned*

Date: 2006-06-23 07:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rebness.livejournal.com
Sphank you! Get Mekare to eat them in your next fic. >:)

Date: 2006-06-23 07:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zhonghua2000.livejournal.com
Oh, that first one is very moving. Also, I love the way you use a lot of conversation in your writings. Excellent! :D

Date: 2006-06-23 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rebness.livejournal.com
Heehee. Thanks! Glad you liked. Man, you should try your hand at some drabbles, you know. I like the short, sharp format. Is good. :D

Date: 2006-06-23 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zhonghua2000.livejournal.com
am actually considering it, don't tell anyone. Guess *who* I'll be doing? >:)

Date: 2006-06-23 09:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rebness.livejournal.com
DO IT!

I'll... I'll... squee, and stuff. :D

Date: 2006-06-23 10:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zhonghua2000.livejournal.com
NO PRESSURE!

But I'd love to see you squee... and stuff. haha! *ahem* I'll make an announcement or... something. :D

Date: 2006-06-23 11:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avariecaita.livejournal.com
That icon ... it's what fanfics are made of!

*goes to snoop the rest of your icons*

Date: 2006-06-23 11:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rebness.livejournal.com
Risque fanfics, I'm guessing. :p

Oh, they're all rubbish. My photoshop skillz are very limited, so I just have to resort to icons by more talented people. Like zis one.

(Paris opera, you'll be miiiiine)

Date: 2006-06-23 10:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avariecaita.livejournal.com
DO ARMAND, WIFEY!

I like angst in the morning.

Date: 2006-06-23 10:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rebness.livejournal.com
Re: your icon. How does that naughty little chienne know such things?!

Date: 2006-06-23 11:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avariecaita.livejournal.com
Two things:

- People should drabble COD characters. OMG! The fun. Not me. Well, maybe me, babycakes.

- My guess is that she was listening in on one of Lestat's ever-popular "mine is bigger than yours" debates.

Date: 2006-06-23 11:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rebness.livejournal.com
*Gasp!*

If they'd had the Child Protection Agency in those days, he'd be one blacklisted Lestat.

Date: 2006-06-23 11:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zhonghua2000.livejournal.com
He hadn't crossed my mind. Good idea. :p

Is *doing Armand* a category on that really scary chart thing? AHA!

Date: 2006-06-23 11:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] avariecaita.livejournal.com
You're hot when you're naughty.

Date: 2006-06-23 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rebness.livejournal.com
Now, then. We'll have none of that sordid business in my journal. Go find a journal of ill-repute - I hear [livejournal.com profile] delawarean is hiring.

*Hiss* I'm on fire tonight!

Date: 2006-06-24 03:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saffronlie.livejournal.com
ZOMG! They are pretty and fun. And they switch points of view, which threw me a little, but in a good way. :D

Date: 2006-06-24 07:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rebness.livejournal.com
Granted, but I think it would be patronising to explain to the reader who was speaking and all that. :p

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